DevilRat's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Armored Yandere Toga (Color)]

Now I want to seize her. :3 She is best Boku No Hero Academia girl.

[Armored Yandere Toga]

I have been taking inspiration from Toga for wanting to draw Toga, I feel you made the design a tad overly complex... Though I do notice your always putting forward. I can tell you dig my hero m-academia nut. The design is great, but hard to view zoomed out. It's the reason why I keep my artwork actually fairly simple. Though notice artwork. I do love your rough art style.

[Marnie and Gloria 2]

Less saturated than usual oddly enough. I do find it still looks great as usual, but not as saturated as previous artwork... I like it, but not as much as previous.

Hanshyn responds:

I kept the shadow layer separately, and I didn't recolor some shadows, that's why it looks less saturated :D

[mice people]

Rats are superior to mice. I find this is neat. Though. they do not look very different from rat people. Something I often draw. :X Though rats tend to be bigger, ears point towards the front for rats, while mice it is towards the sides. Though this looks pretty nice and also I like the far left mouse being pretty expressive.

[Calarts vs. NG meme]

I don't consider the "newgrounds" style the "newgrounds" style. Though it very pretty. I see it as a dark art style rather than anything else. I do love it though. Though the linework should be cleaner, but the shading should be a tad more vibrant to really embrace the dark aesthetic.... My characters have gone through multiple styles.

[Totodile]

The right leg is a little off and mouth are a tad off, but not bad. It's a case of stylization reference, before realistic items reference. The pokemon is based upon crocodiles, but study lizard and dinosaur hipjoints ( includes birds ). To get a better version.

PocketIllust responds:

Thanks! lol
and i wasn't going for a realistic representation of the Pokemon, but i understand what you're trying to say. I'll do my best!!

[wings]

Your monochrome to color is admitly showing.... Though nice artwork. Though try to improve your coloring skills by working with color from the start. I mainly see the odd hue shifts around the butt. And shoulder region. and face.

[Carefree Explorer]

Where is her best friend? Though something looks off on the legs....

CowFz responds:

Maybe they haven't met yet :P and the right leg was off a bit fixed it now.

[angel dust .:hazbin hotel:.]

The torso or general body looks a ton more off than usual. He lacks hips as he is still a guy... The torso region looks like he has a pair of.... When in reality it is hair. Not bad though. Though try to remember he has a ton of male features. Despite being a cross dresser.... The right leg looks a tad.... Off.

Isayaneko responds:

angel has more feminine features owo
and how I draw angel is somehow my thing or not? if i want to draw him kawaii and women like then i draw him kawaii and women like ovo

yes it is hair but it looks like he has boobs is nothing new o0

i really love that pic and i´m fucking proud of it uwu
by the way i think that you can still see that he is a guy... XD

[A restaurant]

Wow, this is a huge improvement.... When it comes to shade, like I said.... Reduce the air brush shading, and avoid using pillow shading ( When you brighten everything in the center or darken everything in the center ) Try to put a focal point.... I am seeing a ton neater lines..... What I remember you told me, you use Pencil 2D.... Use a digital painting or line work focused program, not animation. Free Alternatives: Krita, Fire Alpaca, Medibang, ( InkScape for Vectors over pixels )....

When you are shading. Shift the color of the shadow and the highlight. There is a warm side, and also there is a cool side. You can shade with warmth, or cool.... I am very hyped you are using perspective..... Though look up reference photos ( all artists use them ) and practice it everyday and you will get better... I find this is a tad rough around the edges, but a dramatic step up in the right direction.... Look up tutorials on color values and digital painting...... Try to experiment with your line artwork by putting a color to it.

Kdenye responds:

thanks for the advice. I used paint 3D on this one and I got an idea from a restaurant like pizzeria but still thanks :).